feedback

We got feedback from our class where we watched each others thriller projects. We got told that the thriller opening was effective in black and white. Also the fact that to begin with you didnt see the faces of the killer or the vicitm was effective and made the opening more mysterious and adds suspence for the audience.
We were told the music was good however it could of been far smoother and was too jolty and it didnt fit with eachother parts of the music were too different from eachother and we should of fadded the music in and out better. We were told that the shots which were flickered and mixed together where the killer attacked the vicitm was good and effective. It made the audience feel disorientated and made them wonder what was going on.
We had two last shots of the victim being hung, feedback told us that only one was needed and the last two shots were practially the same and only one was needed to make the audience understand what was going on. It went on for too long at the end and should of just had one last effective shot zooming out of the vicitm.
Some good feedback was when at the beginning the shot of the vicitm walking towards the camera and then moves and the killer was right behind her was effective.