Pitching ideas

I had some ideas from a music video I'd watched recently:

Ayumi Marionette
Uploaded by lisa6060

In the way the people are dressed as living Marionette dolls I think is effectively creepy for a thriller movie.

I was thinking we could have a murderer who likes to leave his victims hanging from trees much like the way a Marionette dolls would hang (much like in this video)

The titles could be broken up by flashes and distorted imagery of one of the deaths occuring. So we could see a struggle but in a distorted, effective way. Then at the end we could have the titles appear on screen and zoom in, then when the music finishes we could see a body hanging from the tree and zoom it out.
The music could retain the sort of tune at the very beginning of the music video. It could be really quiet at first and then eventually get louder and louder by the time the titles actually appear on screen.

Antonia